Well, it just goes to show you that the grass may not be greener…
I unfortunately ran out of time this week. I had bigger plans for Jerry’s panel. Alas, this last minute rush before SPACE has got me very preoccupied! It is only a few weeks away! Sorry to cut this short, but I must keep inking!
Baby howler monkeys are just so… Um whats the word I’m looking for? Bohemian? Nahh, that’s not it. Regimental? No, that’s Scotsmen. I’ll get back with you later on this…
At least the carrot will be pest free (if you don’t count the monkeys).
i think the final panel is fine as-is. What if you cut up the first panel into several smaller panels and spread out the conversation you already have?
how could you have had plans bigger than howler monkeys? really, that’s as big as plans get.
Thanks Jeremy and Baughbe! I guess howler monkeys are pretty big… but you will see soon enough how much bigger this gets.
Thanks for the critique, Gavin. I was hoping to establish more of the environment with the final panel. I am not happy with the flatness of it. Well, if I find time, I may redraw it before I print it in a book.